Out-word Facing (Website) Profile
When I am on the website for our group and I look at individual members profiles the "language" feels a bit odd.About (member name) seems fine.
however
"Elevator Pitch" Feels VERY "selling" and not inviting. I am not sure why that is what is on the OUTWARD facing site.
Can we change that to something like "About the Company" or something?
Seong Bae wrote 2 years ago
Hi Garrison,
Elevator Pitch is one of the fields available in profile so we wanted to be consistent with naming throughout the site.
Are you asking if the content stays the same but just the label changed from Elevator Pitch to About the Company to sound less selling?
Seong
Garrison Fletcher wrote 2 years ago
I understand the consistency, however on the "website" that people might come to look at and check out our members....to have THEM see "Elevator Pitch" feels very "selling" and not inviting. So YES... the "label" is what feels odd. It puts me on the defensive if I saw that and was considering joining the group. Does that help?
Seong Bae wrote 2 years ago
Hi Garrison,
The label has changed to About the Company.
If you need anything else, please let us know.
Seong
Garrison Fletcher wrote 2 years ago
Thank you so much. This just "Feels" so much cleaner for anyone looking at the website.
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